Updated below. So, Cary (the Marine who is coordinating OpforToons) and I were exchanging emails. We both agreed that the logo is good, is on the right track, BUT is still lacking something. So I decided to mess with the colors to add contrast. Then I started messing with the light effects. What do ya’ll think?

Brand X? Or Brand Y?

You tell me … !

Oh, and if the design is basically good then the black and white version should hang together. So what do you think about that too?